Remember when I said I'm aiming for "good enough", well I was lying, to myself.
Ann-Marie, another friend/editor asked what would happen if Janice got rid of the doll. And I thought, now there's an interesting point. So today, I'm adding that into the story line, not as it really happens because there are hundreds of avenues that particular plot point could go down and would constitute a complete re-write, but as her imagining what could happen.
Based on what I'm thinking of adding, I'm wondering if I should change my genre to a darker, much darker, genre like horror.
With that said, I'm off to hopefully finish the addtions. And then one last edit.